I like a poem that, at some point, I can say to myself. That
moment of saying the poem to oneself is not all a poem is about, but without
it, the poem has no skin, no place where the nerves end. Anatomical dolls are
not our idea of beauty.
J.S.
Mill, as we know from his Autobiography, was saved from the horrid erudition
shoveled on his head by his pa by poetry – specifically, Wordsworth’s. He tried
to define poetry in an interestingly wrong headed essay, making, among other
distinctions, this one between poetry and fiction:
“Many of the greatest poems are in the form of fictitious narratives; and, in
almost all good serious fictions, there is true poetry. But there is a radical
distinction between the interest felt in a story as such, and the - excited by
poetry; for the one is derived from incidence, the other from the
representation of feeling. In one, the source of the emotion excited is the
exhibition of a state or states of human sensibility; in the other of a series
of states of mere outward circumstances. Now, all minds are capable of being
affected more or less by representations of the latter kind, and or almost all,
by those of the former; yet the two sources of interest correspond to two
distinct and (as respects their greatest development) mutually exclusive characters
of mind.
“At what age is the passion for a story, for almost any kind of story, merely
as a story, the most intense? In childhood. But that also is the age at which
poetry, even of the simplest description, is least relished and least
understood; because the feelings with which it is especially conversant are yet
undeveloped, and, not having been even in the slightest degree experienced,
cannot be sympathized with. In what stage of the progress of society, again, is
story-telling most valued, and the story-teller in greatest request and honor?
In a rude state like that of the Tartars and Arabs at this day, and of almost
all nations in the earliest ages. But, in this state of society, there is
little poetry except ballads, which are mostly narrative, --that is,
essentially stories,--and derive their principal interest from the incidents.
Considered as poetry, they are of the lowest and most elementary kind: the
feelings depicted, or rather indicated, are the simplest our nature has; such
joys and griefs as the immediate pressure of some outward event excites in rude
minds, which live wholly immersed in outward things, and have never, either
from choice or a force they could not resist, turned themselves to the
contemplation of the world within. Passing now from childhood, and from the
childhood of society, to the grown-up men and women of this most grown-up and
unchild-like age, the minds and hearts of greatest depth and elevation are
commonly those which take greatest delight in poetry: the shallowest and
emptiest, on the contrary, are, at all events, not those least addicted to
novel-reading. This accords, too, with all analogous experience of human
nature. The sort of persons whom not merely in books, but in their lives, we
find perpetually engaged in hunting for excitement from without, are invariably
those who do not possess, either in the vigor of their intellectual powers or
in the depth of their sensibilities, that which would enable them to find ample
excitement nearer home. The most idle and frivolous persons take a natural
delight in fictitious narrative: the excitement it affords is of the kind which
comes from without. Such persons are rarely lovers of poetry, though they may
fancy themselves so because they relish novels in verse. But poetry, which is
the delineation of the deeper and more secret workings of human emotion, is
interesting only to those to whom it recalls what they have felt, or whose
imagination it stirs up to conceive what they could feel, or what they might
have been able to feel, had their outward circumstances been different.”
This seems to me to get one of the main things right – the last sentence
especially – but the main thing wrong, as well as the anthropology. Children
love verse that tells no tale, but sounds funny or interesting, for one thing. Of
course, Mill’s casual sense that the Europeans are adults and the others are
children – though of course living, technically, at the same fucking time – is at
the temporal center of the colonialist mindset. Mill, related on all sides to
the Indian Office, couldn’t help himself. It is important to remember this way
of looking at poetry when thinking about poetry in the 19th and 20th
centuries, as poets sought to navigate the a-chrony of it all.
The main thing, though, is that Mill gets entangled in the
distinction between emotion and incident without having a clear sense that
these two are very interwoven. The idea that reality doesn’t care about your “feelings”
is a shrew denial that, indeed, feelings are as real as rocks. This is a
familiar and endlessly tugged against trap. I think it is just the wrong way to
talk about poetry. Mill is not alone, of course – Eliot has expressed a similar
notion, now and then, and the distinction has had a long and hale life that
continues today. With nefarious consequences, insofar as it empties out what we
can say when we talk about a poem. It de-motivates the poetic impulse.
Myself, I prefer to think of poems in terms of orientation, or maps. Pound's
periplum. What does this mean?
Let me explain by way of an illustration. There is a story in Oliver Sacks The
Man who Mistook Himself for a Hat. A music professor was examined by Sacks. The
professor was, according to all tests, physically blind. The blindness was
caused by the deterioration of the retina. Yet the man claimed to be able to
see. In order to understand the case, Sacks went to the man’s home. And,
indeed, he seemed to get around the house, and to say things about the house,
which only a man with sight could similarly do and say. Or so Sacks thought.
Then they had dinner, and Sacks noticed, during dinner, that the professor was
“singing” the dinner to himself. He had a song, a sort of hum, that he used to
orient himself to all the things on the table.
This is what poetry does, ideally, for me.